Wednesday, 30 December 2015

Updates and Changes to Script and Screenplay


I wished to update and make changes to my trailer, including taking the text message scene out, so to leave it a mystery as to why the five teenagers are in detention and cutting out the video of the party, where Percy was to have beer poured over him by Jessica. I therefore had to update my screenplay and script to show these updates in the process of my trailer.



These are the updated script and screenplay to my trailer, When In Darkness. These updates includes changing the video and phone scene at the very beginning of the trailer to a time-lapse, in order to show the mundane, equilibrium of the school's day to day life. I also took out the dialogue with the five teenagers talking to one another, positioned in a circle and several other scenes in order to cut down the time of the trailer, otherwise it would be over three minutes long and I wish for this to remain around the two minute mark.

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